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稍微读了几篇诗,现代诗还是太好写了

Posted by ygdvv1 - October 26th, 2021


那是一张枯槁的脸

藏着的一段迷茫的思念

当人们正看着天空哀嚎,哀嚎——

天上有多少星光,能射入他的这双眼?


逝去的曾被叫做命运

未来的正被叫做机遇

惨白的神话正吹拂着大地

他已了然有数,于是去寻找他们的无数双眼


写不动了……发现可能自己主要读的很多故事,都是个人出发的叙事,但是现在我越来越到了某种不想从这种角度出发去看故事的心理了,于是诗也就产生了致命的不和谐


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Wow thanks

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